I am the patron saint of oval logic - that's circular logic and distracted by shney objects
Wednesday, December 5, 2012
sensei anon
12 step version of the program SENSEI - ANON - Hi, My name is Scot and I am a sensei, (crowd responses) HYAIIIIII SCOT ( and a fight ensues)
a dying breed
sensei - definition - unassailably virtuous, uncommonly skilled, uncannily perceptive and invariably poor
Guys back me up on this - It's hard to believe the sensei wa 13 and shy once upon a time. My nine year old neighbor did an adorable monologue cause he is trying out for his drama club. And he asked me "Uncle Scot why did you get into theater." My answer was the most honest I could think of "Girls"
it brought me back to the first time I fell in love at the library in william floyd where I saw Sue, Tiffani and Maya , for the first time. Her mother Lorna ( my second ma )took me in as her prodigal caucasian son. And that's where it started. SO many years so many memories
flow - do not try to remember, try softer, to learn how to lose yourself, to die is liberating, once you've been through that the freedom is pure. the art is about relationships and being the best person possible at the moment, flow without thought
I have such a good looking group of students and as I was at the DMV thinking about the lover's PSS fight, that is the height of torture that should be outlawed by the geneva convention
i need a good sparring partner, preferably someone of my level or higher. well that applies to many things in my life.
Guys back me up on this - It's hard to believe the sensei wa 13 and shy once upon a time. My nine year old neighbor did an adorable monologue cause he is trying out for his drama club. And he asked me "Uncle Scot why did you get into theater." My answer was the most honest I could think of "Girls"
it brought me back to the first time I fell in love at the library in william floyd where I saw Sue, Tiffani and Maya , for the first time. Her mother Lorna ( my second ma )took me in as her prodigal caucasian son. And that's where it started. SO many years so many memories
flow - do not try to remember, try softer, to learn how to lose yourself, to die is liberating, once you've been through that the freedom is pure. the art is about relationships and being the best person possible at the moment, flow without thought
I have such a good looking group of students and as I was at the DMV thinking about the lover's PSS fight, that is the height of torture that should be outlawed by the geneva convention
i need a good sparring partner, preferably someone of my level or higher. well that applies to many things in my life.
Tuesday, December 4, 2012
sycorax
when it comes to choice
between virtue and sin
i'll go to where fae rejoice
for they are kith and kin
sycorax dancing round the fire
drinking midnight's wine
milan succumb to that desire
this time now is mine
...
between virtue and sin
i'll go to where fae rejoice
for they are kith and kin
sycorax dancing round the fire
drinking midnight's wine
milan succumb to that desire
this time now is mine
...
both of janus smille
past and future in coin
payment due post defile
both visages will enjoin
caliban dance and sing and laugh
with aerial share the flight
spirit sunder propero's staff
and miranda's dressed in white
past and future in coin
payment due post defile
both visages will enjoin
caliban dance and sing and laugh
with aerial share the flight
spirit sunder propero's staff
and miranda's dressed in white
a whim not to be interfered
the shackles of self exiled
but to the moment revered
a cunning forever wild
the sent is in the air
hands slick with slaughter
to this pack I am heir
when blood is in the water
...
the shackles of self exiled
but to the moment revered
a cunning forever wild
the sent is in the air
hands slick with slaughter
to this pack I am heir
when blood is in the water
...
frenzy finds herself enraged
bad old days flood
to the madess I'm engaged
liberty of drunken blood
sip the wine it's force imbues
I am tooth, claw, and howl
crimson mist senses confuse
prepare for deeds most foul
phoebe's grace most profound
spirit freeze-boil and swoon
heaven ignores what's on the ground
and I shall kiss the moon
bad old days flood
to the madess I'm engaged
liberty of drunken blood
sip the wine it's force imbues
I am tooth, claw, and howl
crimson mist senses confuse
prepare for deeds most foul
phoebe's grace most profound
spirit freeze-boil and swoon
heaven ignores what's on the ground
and I shall kiss the moon
Thursday, November 29, 2012
exchanges - a short play
EXCHANGES
By Scott Ferrara
An ornamental poetry
and stage combat piece in 10 minutes.
The piece itself is meant to be dismembered and broken up between several smaller pieces. This was designed to show off stage combatants. Also the period between the scenes will give your actors some needed rest. It is a stylized struggle between men and women. Scenes 4 and 5 can be removed for time.
CHARACTERS
MELODY
LANCE
JACK
JILL
APHRA
WILL
SCENE 1
- MELODY and LANCE are in the throes of budding romance. But there is
some conflict here. Both are good blades and they are very competitive. Both
fight with rapiers. WILL and APHRA, and JACK and JILL are watching.
MELODY
The
rules of the game were simple. The loser is the one to lose their wit or nerve.
LANCE
When
to many blades fall prey
MELODY
And heart sword and skill win not
And heart sword and skill win not
LANCE
Faith cowers not this day
Faith cowers not this day
MELODY
Send your foes in graves to rot
Send your foes in graves to rot
LANCE
Worry never what will befall
(
LANCE and MELODY kiss )
MELODY
Those fears that lurk in the mind
Those fears that lurk in the mind
(
MELODY pushes LANCE away )
LANCE
Stand firm, proud and tall
Stand firm, proud and tall
MELODY
And at them with steel remind
And at them with steel remind
LANCE
The warrior’s life is fierce and bright
MELODY
Under the gaze of tyrant time
Under the gaze of tyrant time
LANCE
Show the foe who is in the right
Show the foe who is in the right
MELODY
Bury them in pits of lyme
Bury them in pits of lyme
LANCE
The warriors way, glorious and brief
MELODY
Will carry you through the throng
Will carry you through the throng
LANCE
A noble death holds stark relief
A noble death holds stark relief
MELODY
From a coward’s life lived too long
From a coward’s life lived too long
LANCE
Here my words in blood debt repay
MELODY
For a life not destined to last
For a life not destined to last
LANCE
And remember the warriors way
And remember the warriors way
MELODY
Blades will earn and with God’s repast.
Blades will earn and with God’s repast.
(
MELODY slaps LANCE )
SCENE 2 – JACK and JILL have been together for
awhile and are really staring to resent each other. Jack fights with a broadsword, Jill with
rapier and dagger.
JACK
A
gauntlet thrown her will is shown
JILL
To the warrior she turns and faces
To the warrior she turns and faces
JACK
her skill unrivaled her name unknown
her skill unrivaled her name unknown
JILL
she'll put this lout through his paces
she'll put this lout through his paces
(
JILL lightly wounds JACK )
JACK
sword gleaming anger teeming
JILL
she steel herself for the fight
she steel herself for the fight
JACK
his face drops her calm un-seeming
his face drops her calm un-seeming
JILL
as her twin blades take flight
as her twin blades take flight
(
JILL shows off )
JACK
in a dance a speed and grace
JILL
and true power artfully hid
and true power artfully hid
JACK
she
calls out
JILL
" I own this place "
JACK
his courage falters utterly undid
his courage falters utterly undid
(
JACK lightly wounds JILL )
JILL
and in a rush he runs twice the time
JACK
to a place he cares not where he flies
to a place he cares not where he flies
JILL
for her swords unsheathed she seems relieved
for her swords unsheathed she seems relieved
JACK
as she cut him deeply with her eyes.
as she cut him deeply with her eyes.
(
Stalemate )
SCENE 3
WILL and APHRA were once deeply and passionately in love. He still loves
her. This fight is vindictive on both
parties. Will fights with rapier and buckler, Aphra a pair of main gauche. This is the most brutal of the matches.
Neither is giving or receiving quarter.
WILL
The
Muse. I hear her siren voice in the winds
APHRA
These words he gives me in whispers
These words he gives me in whispers
WILL
The poets need to write begins
The poets need to write begins
APHRA
and the warrior never slumbers
and the warrior never slumbers
WILL
Of her beauty I can say so much
APHRA
In paths like strikes, so many ways
In paths like strikes, so many ways
WILL
But her angelic voice her voice is such
But her angelic voice her voice is such
APHRA
And there is where my heart stays
And there is where my heart stays
WILL
Please milady say my name
APHRA
And give those words YOU need
And give those words YOU need
WILL
To keep you alive all the same
To keep you alive all the same
APHRA
In all these words for you bleed
In all these words for you bleed
WILL
To see you my celestial vision
(APHRA disarms WILL, WILL is now fighting hand
and buckler. Which he throws away and it degenerates into hand to hand
brawling )
APHRA
And please know I write always for you
And please know I write always for you
WILL
It points out the grand collision
It points out the grand collision
APHRA
Between spirit and flesh true
Between spirit and flesh true
WILL
Someday you'll return to me
APHRA
As loves like rhyme oft repeat
As loves like rhyme oft repeat
WILL
That day my soul will be set free
That day my soul will be set free
APHRA
Until then I scribble on this paper sheet
Until then I scribble on this paper sheet
WILL
My muse of swords and quills
APHRA
I am my reason for being
I am my reason for being
WILL
And time without you slowly kills
And time without you slowly kills
APHRA
My love is light worth seeing
My love is light worth seeing
WILL
So my candle dims, my fingers ink stained
APHRA
Night has turned to radiant song
Night has turned to radiant song
WILL
Please remember warrior poets need be trained
Please remember warrior poets need be trained
APHRA
Not to go on too long
Not to go on too long
WILL
But one last stanza before I go
APHRA
And face this luminous day
And face this luminous day
WILL
For you My muse,
For you My muse,
APHRA
your love,
WILL
my
fights,
APHRA
your
words,
WILL
will show
WILL
AND APHRA
They
are worth the whispers, for which I pray
SCENE 4 – The men, are all gathered doing
light sparring. This is more playful, but progresses to serious. They trade
weapons through exchanges throughout the fight.
JACK
Maps to Terra Incognita
WILL
Undiscovered yet within her
Undiscovered yet within her
JACK
The geography of yearning shown
The geography of yearning shown
LANCE
To know love and yet lost
WILL
Is this poet’s mead
Is this poet’s mead
JACK
To withstand the dreadful cost
To withstand the dreadful cost
LANCE
Heart follow ere it lead
Heart follow ere it lead
WILL
To find her once again
JACK
And keep her for our sake
And keep her for our sake
LANCE
To bring the now from then
To bring the now from then
WILL
Leaving destruction in it’s wake
Leaving destruction in it’s wake
JACK
I will fight and die for those eyes
I will fight and die for those eyes
LANCE
And this love that I hold dear
And this love that I hold dear
WILL
On that kiss forever lies
On that kiss forever lies
JACK
And of softest lips appear
And of softest lips appear
LANCE
Many foes and tales of woes
Many foes and tales of woes
WILL
Will flood into this breach
Will flood into this breach
LANCE
But in heart danger wisdom grows
But in heart danger wisdom grows
JACK
When the gods of love beseech
When the gods of love beseech
LANCE
Learn from this my student
WILL
And learn this lesson well
And learn this lesson well
JACK
Love is never imprudent
Love is never imprudent
JACK
/ LANCE AND WILL
When you have it’s tale to tell
When you have it’s tale to tell
WILL
When you doubt loves fables
JACK
And you’re searching for it’s theme
And you’re searching for it’s theme
LANCE
It’s life without that turns the tables
It’s life without that turns the tables
WILL,
JACK, LANCE
It’s a rhyme sans a scheme
It’s a rhyme sans a scheme
JACK
Love has it’s own wisdom
Love has it’s own wisdom
LANCE
Though not always clear
Though not always clear
WILL
And when a guest in it’s kingdom
And when a guest in it’s kingdom
JACK
Embrace it without fear
Embrace it without fear
LANCE
Cause it’s times are few and far
WILL
Grab it when it arrives
Grab it when it arrives
JACK
It’s loss is worth the scar
It’s loss is worth the scar
WILL,
JACK, LANCE
But life without none survives.
But life without none survives.
SCENE 5 - The women are all gathered for sparring,
this too progresses into something more violent. They trade weapons through exchanges
throughout the fight.
MELODY
Of
oldest themes and warrior sages
JILL
Tell of tales of daring do
Tell of tales of daring do
APHRA
The poems last beyond the ages
The poems last beyond the ages
MELODY
And keep heroes hearts true
And keep heroes hearts true
JILL
It’s the
damsel that keeps them going
MELDOY
Through the battles melee
Through the battles melee
JILL
The need see her once again is growing
The need see her once again is growing
APHRA
Her eyes drive him through the fray
Her eyes drive him through the fray
MELODY
Of all the monsters I have seen
JILL
With scars I have paid this toll
With scars I have paid this toll
APHRA
The hardest foes have always been
The hardest foes have always been
MELODY
Are the ones that take your soul
Are the ones that take your soul
JILL
But a soul that’s freely given
But a soul that’s freely given
APHRA
Like a man’s word or deed
Like a man’s word or deed
MELODY
Will by the gods be forgiven
Will by the gods be forgiven
JILL
For the gods obey this creed
For the gods obey this creed
APHRA
A love that true and selfless
A love that true and selfless
MELODY
A love greater than oneself
A love greater than oneself
JILL
Will give bounties endless
Will give bounties endless
APHRA
Then some dusty tome upon a shelf
Then some dusty tome upon a shelf
MELODY
So
many hide in stony tower
JILL
Never taking this chance
Never taking this chance
APHRA
To lose yourself to a higher power
To lose yourself to a higher power
JILL,
APHRA, MELODY
And ask that damsel to dance
And ask that damsel to dance
SCENE 6 – The grand melee. Men
versus women. LANCE and MELODY stand
together. JACK and JILL fight for their gender. WILL defends APHRA and later
APHRA defends WILL.
LANCE
Take
your time the master shouted
JACK
And choose your moment wisely
And choose your moment wisely
WILL
Speed
has power undoubted
MELODY
But it
But it
JILL
means nothing
APHRA
if
you miss me
LANCE
Seduction in blade and deed
Seduction in blade and deed
JACK
Is like guarding your center line
Is like guarding your center line
WILL
keep it closed until you succeed
keep it closed until you succeed
JACK,
LANCE WILL
and hit a hit finer than sweet w
and hit a hit finer than sweet w
MELODY
Parry,
JILL
retreat
APHRA
and
disengage
JACK
Dodge from side to side
Dodge from side to side
LANCE
AND WILL
Build in the opponent a quiet rage
Build in the opponent a quiet rage
JACK,
LANCE , WILL
Let not your blows swing wide
Let not your blows swing wide
MELODY,
JILL, APHRA
Then when that heart is open
Then when that heart is open
JACK
LANCE WILL
strike
strike
JILL
strong,
MELODY
fast,
and clean
APHRA
And above all see and listen
And above all see and listen
JACK,
LANCE, WILL
Their body tells the scene
Their body tells the scene
LANCE
Combat is that sacred art
Combat is that sacred art
MELODY
Of hitting and not getting hit
Of hitting and not getting hit
JACK
All players play their part
All players play their part
JILL
Of blades of steel and wit
Of blades of steel and wit
WILL
Above all take those moments
Above all take those moments
APHRA
Feel them in your chest
Feel them in your chest
MELODY,
JILL, APHRA
Give your foe gentle torments
Give your foe gentle torments
JACK
AND JILL
And give them no time for rest
And give them no time for rest
LANCE AND MELODY
So remember this my novices
WILL
AND APHRA
There are many ways to miss
There are many ways to miss
ALL
But of all of wit's and steel's promises
But of all of wit's and steel's promises
MELODY,
JILL, APHRA
Seal it with a kiss
Seal it with a kiss
(
All the lovers embrace )
Monday, October 29, 2012
Form and from natures fear
Days she is much kinder
A small kiss proves she’s near
Her power a reminder
Storm awaiting, anticipation
Wind, lightning, thunder rain
Non debating, expectation
the defintion of pain
To the ocean reach
And to the sky caress
To the gods of love beseech
the heart’s wounds redress
winds howl in torment
sky cracks as glass
now is that moment
at it shall not pass
and to her tears I embrace
her lullaby a whispered song
the devinity of that face
where all of love’s love belong
For this passion on this page
Will see once again my sky
For its misses pales in rage
When is kisses true loves eye
Thursday, October 18, 2012
man up
When the hell did men stop acting like men? I am not sayng
act like knuckle dragging troglodytes. But be men. Real men value intelligence,
courage, sensitivity, bravery, and skill. Courage is going on to spite fear. Time to Man up guys. Yeah times are hard.
Times have always been hard. Take some damn responsibiity. When the only
battles you’ve fought were video games? When the only loves you’ve ever felt
discarded for momentary inconveniences? When you could debate without anger?When
you can fight with a guy and buy him a drink afterwards?When did softness
become weakness and agression strength? When did tears become poison? Some of
the strongest men I know were raised by single mothers. Some of the bravest men
I knew never fired a gun but held to their principles and never chest thumped.
Honor is the magnetic north of our moral compass. It’s time to navigate back.
Time to be men again. Not abusive and arrogant. But gentle and strong. Time to
be gentle-men.
Monday, October 8, 2012
raptures
Rhapsody, my heart leaps like a falcon seeking to soar. There is no measure. No distance. I am faster than light. See these and believe these my notes, and feel them as a kiss when you say them in whispers. In silhouette etched in the shadow you in my furious passion phrases are my life's sentence. I serve it willingly. You are my music and even my the darkness I see the sound, from every cell. It is your very eloquence that maks me write music in the unsteady tempo of this heart.
Monday, October 1, 2012
Being a man of action
Of this love tis but a fraction
For your satisfation
I tell you this my creed
In those eyes I find joy
Sarcastic and very coy
With these words shall I deploy
In these petals you will read
Being one with the flow
This love is all I know
With this poem hope to show
This flower from the seed
I call to you Phoebe’s daughter
Blood feeds earth though slaughter
I boil and freeze like water
For in that heart I am freed
My moon it has begun
To the eclipse I shall run
I am a shadow to your sun
Your love my meat and mead
May this passion never cool
This fire over rule
I rather be this fool
No obstacle impede
So I ask for this chance
In the delerium of romance
I ask you for this dance
If you let me lead
Now late is the hour
I must storm this tower
Yield to a greater power
And to your mercy I concede
Friday, September 28, 2012
this feeling long forgotten
she has eyes of starlight, and a smile that makes the sun envious, and the man I am once again remembers why I chose the emotional content I have. I've faced armed men and with her I am afraid. I am strong but in those constellations I am weak. . Gods I love this feeling. Courage is going on in spite of fear. For her I hold the sun in my chest, and forget the memory of past scars. this moment is the purest on incarnations , tis a summoning and exaltation and I would not trade it for the worlds. borrow my eyes and see what I see. Perfect grace in a laugh of silver
I believe in fairy tales and slaying dragons, knightly virtues and trials by ordeal, I know my place and it's between her and anything that would harm her. Gods Let me take that pain from her. and I would do anything to be worthy of her, to be her hero. Cause she is the cause worth fighting for.
Love is an inconveinient thing
When the mind in battle dwell
Ringing stell when a heart may sing
Lost and found in her spell
So with a whinsome thought
The bastard poem writes itself
In my heart and soul are wrought
An obvious pineing in rhymed stealth
The passion as with me oft flows
If fire, rain, quake and lightning
These few words in truest love shows
With the passion senses heigtenning
Speak to me my stars and sky
For you know how I do feel
With cunning visage I oft rely
When stripped bare in eyes reveal
Tell me you see, and it is the same
That my love comes from confusion
The battered lion heart reclaim
And disbelieve that illusion
Wednesday, September 12, 2012
Scotisms by Ghostwing
SCOMENT- A Scot moment
SCOMENTARY- A brief moment of Scot/Random Scot narration.
SCOMENTUM- A very fast Scot Moment
SCOMENTAL- An insane Scot moment (which is alot of them)
SCOMENTION- If you mention a Scot moment
SCOSICAL-Scots attempted muscial theatre.
SCOSIASM- Moments of Scots enthusiasm.
SCOCASM- Scot Sarcasm.
SCOTIALISM- Sharing Scot equally with everybody
SCOWY- Scot being flowy
SCOMENTARY- A brief moment of Scot/Random Scot narration.
SCOMENTUM- A very fast Scot Moment
SCOMENTAL- An insane Scot moment (which is alot of them)
SCOMENTION- If you mention a Scot moment
SCOSICAL-Scots attempted muscial theatre.
SCOSIASM- Moments of Scots enthusiasm.
SCOCASM- Scot Sarcasm.
SCOTIALISM- Sharing Scot equally with everybody
SCOWY- Scot being flowy
Tuesday, September 11, 2012
a toast
"To absent friends, lost loves, old gods, and the season of mists; and may each and every one of us always give the devil his due."
we are all new yorker's, be safe, live love fight and be free
we are all new yorker's, be safe, live love fight and be free
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
Story and Structure - Mini Lessons
THE STAGES OF THE HERO'S JOURNEY
1. Ordinary World
2. Call To Adventure
3. Refusal of the Call
4. Meeting With The Mentor
5. Crossing The First Threshold
6. Tests, Allies, Enemies
7. Approach
8. Supreme Ordeal
9. Reward
10. The Road back
11. Resurrection
12. Return With Elixir
· THE ORDINARY WORLD
Most stories take the hero out of the ordinary, mundane world and into a Special World, new and alien. This is the familiar "fish out of water" idea which has spawned countless films and TV shows.
If you're going to show a fish out of his customary element, you first have to show him in that Ordinary World to create a vivid contrast with the strange new world he is about to enter.
Vocabulary – bordinary, mundane,special, alien,”fish out of water”,customary,vivid, contrast
· THE CALL TO ADVENTURE
The hero is presented with a problem, challenge, or adventure to undertake. Once presented with a Call to Adventure, she can no longer remain indefinitely in the comfort of the Ordinary World.
The Call to Adventure establishes the stakes of the game, and makes clear the hero's goal: to win the treasure or the lover, to get revenge or right a wrong, to achieve a dream, confront a challenge, or change a life.
Vocabulary – problem, challenge, adventure, undertake, presented, comfort, establish, stakes, goal.
· REFUSAL OF THE CALL
This one is about fear. Often at this point the hero balks at the threshold of adventure, Refusing the Call or expressing reluctance. After all, she is facing the greatest of all fears, terror of the unknown. The hero has not fully committed to the journey and may still be thinking of turning back. Some other influence---a change in circumstances, a further offense against the natural order of things, or the encouragement of a Mentor---is required to get her past this turning point of fear.
Vocabulary –threshold, balks, reluctance, terror, unknown, influence, circumstances
· MENTOR (THE WISE OLD MAN OR WOMAN)
By this time many stories will have introduced a Merlin-like character who is the hero's Mentor. The relationship between hero and Mentor is one of the most common themes in mythology, and one of the richest in its symbolic value. It stands for the bond between parent and child, teacher and student, doctor and patient, god and man.
The function of Mentors is to prepare the hero to face the unknown. They may give advice, guidance or magical equipment.
However the Mentor can only go so far with the hero. eventually the hero must face the unknown alone. Sometimes the Mentor is required to give the hero a swift kick in the pants to get the adventure going.
Vocabulary – Mentor, Bond, Guidamce, equipment, required, “swift kick in the pants”
· CROSSING THE FIRST THRESHOLD
Now the hero finally commits to the adventure and fully enters the Special World of the story for the first time by Crossing the First Threshold . He agrees to face the consequences of dealing with the problem or challenge posed in the Call to Adventure. This is the moment when the story takes off and the adventure really gets going. The balloon goes up, the ship sails, the romance begins, the plane or the spaceship soars off, the wagon train gets rolling.
Vocabulary – consequnce, commit
· TESTS, ALLIES AND ENEMIES
Once across the First Threshold, the hero naturally encounters new challenges and Tests, makes Allies and Enemies, and begins to learn the rules of the Special World.
Saloons and seedy bars seem to be good places for these transactions. Countless Westerns take the hero to a saloon where his manhood and determination are tested.
Scenes like these allow for character development as we watch the hero and his companions react under stress.
Of course not all tests, Alliances, and Enmities are confronted in bars. In many stories, these are simply encounters on the road.
Vocabulary – Tests , allies, enemies, alliances, encounter,
· APPROACH TO THE INMOST CAVE
The hero comes at last to the edge of a dangerous place, sometimes deep underground, where the object of the quest is hidden. Often it's the headquarters of the hero's greatest enemy, the most dangerous spot in the Special World, the Inmost Cave. When the hero enters that fearful place he will cross the second major threshold. Heroes often pause at the gate to prepare,plan, and outwit the villain's guards. This the phase of the Approach.
Approach covers all the preparations for entering the Inmost Cave and confronting death or supreme danger.
Vocabulary – approach, danger, outwit, prepare, plan
· THE SUPREME ORDEAL
Here the fortunes of the hero hit bottom in a direct confrontation with his greatest fear. he faces the possibility of death and is brought to the brink in a battle with a hostile force. The Supreme Ordeal is a "black moment" for the audience, as we are held in suspense and tension, not knowing if he will live or die.
This is a critical moment in any story, an Ordeal in which the hero must die or appear to die so that she can be born again. It's a major source of the magic of the heroic myth. The experience of the preceding stages have led us, the audience, to identify with the hero and her fate. What happens to the hero happens to us. We are encouraged to experience the brink-of-death moment with her. Our emotions are temporarily depressed so that they can be revived by the hero's return from death. The result of this revival is a feeling of elation and exhilaration.
Every story needs such life-or-death moment in which the hero or his goals are in moral jeopardy.
Vocabulary – supreme, ordeal, suspense, tension, preceding, depressed, elation, exhilaration, moral, jeopardy
· REWARD (SEIZING THE SWORD)
Having survived death, beaten the dragon, or slain the Minotaur, hero and audience have cause to celebrate. The hero now takes possession of the treasure she has come seeking, her Reward. It might be a special weapon like a magic sword, or a token like the =Grail or some elixir which can heal the wounded land.
Sometimes the "sword" is knowledge and experience that leads to greater understanding and a reconciliation with hostile forces.
Vocabulary – reward, celebrate, possession, seeking, token, elixier, reconciliation, hostile
· THE ROAD BACK
The hero's not out of the woods yet. We're crossing into Act Three now as the hero begins to deal with the consequences of confronting the dark forces of the Supreme Ordeal. If she has not yet managed to reconcile with the parent, the gods, or the hostile forces, they may come raging after her. Some of the best chase scenes spring up at this point, as the hero is pursued on The Road Back by the vengeful forces she has disturbed by Seizing the Sword, the elixir or the treasure.
This stage marks the decision to return to the Ordinary World. The hero realizes that the Special World must eventually be left behind, and there are still dangers, temptations, and tests ahead.
Vocabulary – realization, consequence, decision, disturb, temptations
· RESURRECTION
In ancient times, hunters and warriors had to be purified before they returned to their communities, because they had blood on their hands. The hero who has been to the realm of the dead must be reborn and cleansed in one last Ordeal of death and Resurrection before returning to the Ordinary World of the living.
This is often a second life-and-death moment, almost a replay of the death and rebirth of the Supreme Ordeal. Death and darkness get in one last, desperate shot before being finally defeated. It's a kind of final exam for the hero, who must be tested once more to see if he has really learned the lessons of the Supreme Ordeal.
The hero is transformed by these moments of death-and-rebirth, and is able to return to ordinary life reborn as a new being.
Vocabulary – purify, destiny, community, desperate, transform, ordinary
· RETURN WITH ELIXIR
The hero Returns to the Ordinary World, but the journey is meaningless unless she brings back some Elixir, treasure, or lesson from the Special World. The Elixir is a magic potion with the power to heal. It may be a great treasure like the Grail that magically heals the wounded land, or it simply might be knowledge or experience that could be useful; to the community someday.
Sometimes the elixir is treasure won on the quest, but it may be love, freedom, wisdom, or the knowledge that the Special World exists and can be survived.
The Hero's Journey is a skeletal framework that should be fleshed out with the details and surprises of the individual story. The structure should not call attention to itself, nor should it be followed too precisely. The order of the stages given here is only one of many possible variations. The stages can be deleted, added to, and drastically shuffled without losing any of their power.
The Hero's Journey is infinitely flexible, capable of endless variation without sacrificing any of its magic, and it will outlive us all.
Vocabulary – skeletal, framework, fleshed out, details, infinitely, flexible, sacrificing, variation
Notes on Writing Weird FictionBy H. P. Lovecraft
My reason for writing stories is to give myself the satisfaction of visualising more clearly and detailedly and stably the vague, elusive, fragmentary impressions of wonder, beauty, and adventurous expectancy which are conveyed to me by certain sights (scenic, architectural, atmospheric, etc.), ideas, occurrences, and images encountered in art and literature. I choose weird stories because they suit my inclination best—one of my strongest and most persistent wishes being to achieve, momentarily, the illusion of some strange suspension or violation of the galling limitations of time, space, and natural law which for ever imprison us and frustrate our curiosity about the infinite cosmic spaces beyond the radius of our sight and analysis. These stories frequently emphasise the element of horror because fear is our deepest and strongest emotion, and the one which best lends itself to the creation of nature-defying illusions. Horror and the unknown or the strange are always closely connected, so that it is hard to create a convincing picture of shattered natural law or cosmic alienage or “outsideness” without laying stress on the emotion of fear. The reason why time plays a great part in so many of my tales is that this element looms up in my mind as the most profoundly dramatic and grimly terrible thing in the universe. Conflict with time seems to me the most potent and fruitful theme in all human expression.Vocabulary – visualizing, detail, emphasize, scenic, architectural, atmosphere,alien, persistent, limitations, illusion, suspension, violation, curiosity, radius, potent, fruitful, expression While my chosen form of story-writing is obviously a special and perhaps a narrow one, it is none the less a persistent and permanent type of expression, as old as literature itself. There will always be a small percentage of persons who feel a burning curiosity about unknown outer space, and a burning desire to escape from the prison-house of the known and the real into those enchanted lands of incredible adventure and infinite possibilities which dreams open up to us, and which things like deep woods, fantastic urban towers, and flaming sunsets momentarily suggest. These persons include great authors as well as insignificant amateurs like myself—Dunsany, Poe, Arthur Machen, M. R. James, Algernon Blackwood, and Walter de la Mare being typical masters in this field. As to how I write a story—there is no one way. Each one of my tales has a different history. Once or twice I have literally written out a dream; but usually I start with a mood or idea or image which I wish to express, and revolve it in my mind until I can think of a good way of embodying it in some chain of dramatic occurrences capable of being recorded in concrete terms. I tend to run through a mental list of the basic conditions or situations best adapted to such a mood or idea or image, and then begin to speculate on logical and naturally motivated explanations of the given mood or idea or image in terms of the basic condition or situation chosen. The actual process of writing is of course as varied as the choice of theme and initial conception; but if the history of all my tales were analysed, it is just possible that the following set of rules might be deduced from the average procedure: (1) Prepare a synopsis or scenario of events in the order of their absolute occurrence —not the order of their narration. Describe with enough fulness to cover all vital points and motivate all incidents planned. Details, comments, and estimates of consequences are sometimes desirable in this temporary framework. (2) Prepare a second synopsis or scenario of events—this one in order of narration (not actual occurrence), with ample fulness and detail, and with notes as to changing perspective, stresses, and climax. Change the original synopsis to fit if such a change will increase the dramatic force or general effectiveness of the story. Interpolate or delete incidents at will—never being bound by the original conception even if the ultimate result be a tale wholly different from that first planned. Let additions and alterations be made whenever suggested by anything in the formulating process. (3) Write out the story—rapidly, fluently, and not too critically—following the second or narrative-order synopsis. Change incidents and plot whenever the developing process seems to suggest such change, never being bound by any previous design. If the development suddenly reveals new opportunities for dramatic effect or vivid storytelling, add whatever is thought advantageous—going back and reconciling the early parts to the new plan. Insert and delete whole sections if necessary or desirable, trying different beginnings and endings until the best arrangement is found. But be sure that all references throughout the story are thoroughly reconciled with the final design. Remove all possible superfluities—words, sentences, paragraphs, or whole episodes or elements—observing the usual precautions about the reconciling of all references. (4) Revise the entire text, paying attention to vocabulary, syntax, rhythm of prose, proportioning of parts, niceties of tone, grace and convincingness or transitions (scene to scene, slow and detailed action to rapid and sketchy time-covering action and vice versa. . . . etc., etc., etc.), effectiveness of beginning, ending, climaxes, etc., dramatic suspense and interest, plausibility and atmosphere, and various other elements. (5) Prepare a neatly typed copy—not hesitating to add final revisory touches where they seem in order. The first of these stages is often purely a mental one—a set of conditions and happenings being worked out in my head, and never set down until I am ready to prepare a detailed synopsis of events in order of narration. Then, too, I sometimes begin even the actual writing before I know how I shall develop the idea—this beginning forming a problem to be motivated and exploited.Vocabulary – occurrence, narration, possible, superfluous, reconcile, revose, proportion, plausibility, vice versa There are, I think, four distinct types of weird story; one expressing a mood or feeling, another expressing a pictorial conception, a third expressing a general situation, condition, legend, or intellectual conception, and a fourth explaining a definite tableau or specific dramatic situation or climax. In another way, weird tales may be grouped into two rough categories—those in which the marvel or horror concerns some condition or phenomenon, and those in which it concerns some action of persons in connexion with a bizarre condition or phenomenon. Each weird story—to speak more particularly of the horror type—seems to involve five definite elements: (a) some basic, underlying horror or abnormality—condition, entity, etc.—, (b) the general effects or bearings of the horror, (c) the mode of manifestation—object embodying the horror and phenomena observed—, (d) the types of fear-reaction pertaining to the horror, and (e) the specific effects of the horror in relation to the given set of conditions. In writing a weird story I always try very carefully to achieve the right mood and atmosphere, and place the emphasis where it belongs. One cannot, except in immature pulp charlatan–fiction, present an account of impossible, improbable, or inconceivable phenomena as a commonplace narrative of objective acts and conventional emotions. Inconceivable events and conditions have a special handicap to overcome, and this can be accomplished only through the maintenance of a careful realism in every phase of the story except that touching on the one given marvel. This marvel must be treated very impressively and deliberately—with a careful emotional “build-up”—else it will seem flat and unconvincing. Being the principal thing in the story, its mere existence should overshadow the characters and events. But the characters and events must be consistent and natural except where they touch the single marvel. In relation to the central wonder, the characters should shew the same overwhelming emotion which similar characters would shew toward such a wonder in real life. Never have a wonder taken for granted. Even when the characters are supposed to be accustomed to the wonder I try to weave an air of awe and impressiveness corresponding to what the reader should feel. A casual style ruins any serious fantasy. Atmosphere, not action, is the great desideratum of weird fiction. Indeed, all that a wonder story can ever be is a vivid picture of a certain type of human mood. The moment it tries to be anything else it becomes cheap, puerile, and unconvincing. Prime emphasis should be given to subtle suggestion—imperceptible hints and touches of selective associative detail which express shadings of moods and build up a vague illusion of the strange reality of the unreal. Avoid bald catalogues of incredible happenings which can have no substance or meaning apart from a sustaining cloud of colour and symbolism. These are the rules or standards which I have followed—consciously or unconsciously—ever since I first attempted the serious writing of fantasy. That my results are successful may well be disputed—but I feel at least sure that, had I ignored the considerations mentioned in the last few paragraphs, they would have been much worse than they are.Vocabulary - a mood or feeling, expressing , pictorial conception, situation, condition, legend, or intellectual conception, definite, tableau, specific, dramatic, situation, climax. Condition, phenomenon, elements, abnormality—condition, entity, manifestation, embody, phenomena, observed –reaction, pertaining
There are four lessons involved in the Lester Dent master pulp fiction plot, each is based on the 1500 word story blocks.
Lesson 1 – First 1500 words –
1. A DIFFERENT MURDER METHOD FOR VILLAIN TO USE
2. A DIFFERENT THING FOR VILLAIN TO BE SEEKING
3. A DIFFERENT LOCALE
4. A MENACE WHICH IS TO HANG LIKE A CLOUD OVER HERO
Lesson 2 – Second 1500 words
1--Shovel more grief onto the hero.
2--Hero, being heroic, struggles, and his struggles lead up to:
3--Another physical conflict.
4--A surprising plot twist to end the 1500 words.
Lesson 3- THIRD 1500 WORDS
1--Shovel the grief onto the hero.
2--Hero makes some headway, and corners the villain or somebody in:
3--A physical conflict.
4--A surprising plot twist, in which the hero preferably gets it in the neck bad, to end the 1500 words.
Lesson 4 - FOURTH 1500 WORDS
1--Shovel the difficulties more thickly upon the hero.
2--Get the hero almost buried in his troubles. (Figuratively, the villain has him prisoner and has him framed for a murder rap; the girl is presumably dead, everything is lost, and the DIFFERENT murder method is about to dispose of the suffering protagonist.)
3--The hero extricates himself using HIS OWN SKILL, training or brawn.
4--The mysteries remaining--one big one held over to this point will help grip interest--are cleared up in course of final conflict as hero takes
the situation in hand.
5--Final twist, a big surprise, (This can be the villain turning out to be the unexpected person, having the "Treasure" be a dud, etc.)
6--The snapper, the punch line to end it.
The Lester Dent Pulp Paper Master Fiction Plot
This is a formula, a master plot, for any 6000 word pulp story. It has worked on adventure, detective, western and war-air. It tells exactly where to put everything. It shows definitely just what must happen in each successive thousand words.No yarn of mine written to the formula has yet failed to sell.The business of building stories seems not much different from the business of building anything else.Here's how it starts:1. A DIFFERENT MURDER METHOD FOR VILLAIN TO USE2. A DIFFERENT THING FOR VILLAIN TO BE SEEKING3. A DIFFERENT LOCALE4. A MENACE WHICH IS TO HANG LIKE A CLOUD OVER HEROOne of these DIFFERENT things would be nice, two better, three swell. It may help if they are fully in mind before tackling the rest.A different murder method could be--different. Thinking of shooting, knifing, hydrocyanic, garroting, poison needles, scorpions, a few others, and writing them on paper gets them where they may suggest something. Scorpions and their poison bite? Maybe mosquitos or flies treated with deadly germs?If the victims are killed by ordinary methods, but found under strange and identical circumstances each time, it might serve, the reader of course not knowing until the end, that the method of murder is ordinary. Scribes who have their villain's victims found with butterflies, spiders or bats stamped on them could conceivably be flirting with this gag.Probably it won't do a lot of good to be too odd, fanciful or grotesque with murder methods.The different thing for the villain to be after might be something other than jewels, the stolen bank loot, the pearls, or some other old ones.Here, again one might get too bizarre.Unique locale? Easy. Selecting one that fits in with the murder method and the treasure--thing that villain wants--makes it simpler, and it's also nice to use a familiar one, a place where you've lived or worked. So many pulpateers don't. It sometimes saves embarrassment to know nearly as much about the locale as the editor, or enough to fool him.Here's a nifty much used in faking local color. For a story laid in Egypt, say, author finds a book titled "Conversational Egyptian Easily Learned," or something like that. He wants a character to ask in Egyptian, "What's the matter?" He looks in the book and finds, "El khabar, eyh?" To keep the reader from getting dizzy, it's perhaps wise to make it clear in some fashion, just what that means. Occasionally the text will tell this, or someone can repeat it in English. But it's a doubtful move to stop and tell the reader in so many words the English translation.The writer learns they have palm trees in Egypt. He looks in the book, finds the Egyptian for palm trees, and uses that. This kids editors and readers into thinking he knows something about Egypt.Here's the second installment of the master plot. Divide the 6000 word yarn into four 1500 word parts. In each 1500 word part, put the following:FIRST 1500 WORDS1--First line, or as near thereto as possible, introduce the hero and swat him with a fistful of trouble. Hint at a mystery, a menace or a problem to be solved--something the hero has to cope with.2--The hero pitches in to cope with his fistful of trouble. (He tries to fathom the mystery, defeat the menace, or solve the problem.)3--Introduce ALL the other characters as soon as possible. Bring them on in action.4--Hero's endevours land him in an actual physical conflict near the end of the first 1500 words.5--Near the end of first 1500 words, there is a complete surprise twist in the plot development.SO FAR: Does it have SUSPENSE? Is there a MENACE to the hero?Does everything happen logically?At this point, it might help to recall that action should do something besides advance the hero over the scenery. Suppose the hero has learned the dastards of villains have seized somebody named Eloise, who can explain the secret of what is behind all these sinister events. The hero corners villains, they fight, and villains get away. Not so hot.Hero should accomplish something with his tearing around, if only to rescue Eloise, and surprise! Eloise is a ring-tailed monkey. The hero counts the rings on Eloise's tail, if nothing better comes to mind.They're not real. The rings are painted there. Why?SECOND 1500 WORDS1--Shovel more grief onto the hero.2--Hero, being heroic, struggles, and his struggles lead up to:3--Another physical conflict.4--A surprising plot twist to end the 1500 words.NOW: Does second part have SUSPENSE?Does the MENACE grow like a black cloud?Is the hero getting it in the neck?Is the second part logical?DON'T TELL ABOUT IT***Show how the thing looked. This is one of the secrets of writing; never tell the reader--show him. (He trembles, roving eyes, slackened jaw, and such.) MAKE THE READER SEE HIM.When writing, it helps to get at least one minor surprise to the printed page. It is reasonable to to expect these minor surprises to sort of inveigle the reader into keeping on. They need not be such profound efforts. One method of accomplishing one now and then is to be gently misleading. Hero is examining the murder room. The door behind him begins slowly to open. He does not see it. He conducts his examination blissfully. Door eases open, wider and wider, until--surprise! The glass pane falls out of the big window across the room. It must have fallen slowly, and air blowing into the room caused the door to open. Then what the heck made the pane fall so slowly? More mystery.Characterizing a story actor consists of giving him some things which make him stick in the reader's mind. TAG HIM. BUILD YOUR PLOTS SO THAT ACTION CAN BE CONTINUOUS.THIRD 1500 WORDS1--Shovel the grief onto the hero.2--Hero makes some headway, and corners the villain or somebody in:3--A physical conflict.4--A surprising plot twist, in which the hero preferably gets it in the neck bad, to end the 1500 words.DOES: It still have SUSPENSE?The MENACE getting blacker?The hero finds himself in a hell of a fix?It all happens logically?These outlines or master formulas are only something to make you certain of inserting some physical conflict, and some genuine plot twists, with a little suspense and menace thrown in. Without them, there is no pulp story.These physical conflicts in each part might be DIFFERENT, too. If one fight is with fists, that can take care of the pugilism until next the next yarn. Same for poison gas and swords. There may, naturally, be exceptions. A hero with a peculiar punch, or a quick draw, might use it more than once.The idea is to avoid monotony.ACTION:Vivid, swift, no words wasted. Create suspense, make the reader see and feel the action.ATMOSPHERE:Hear, smell, see, feel and taste.DESCRIPTION:Trees, wind, scenery and water.THE SECRET OF ALL WRITING IS TO MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT.FOURTH 1500 WORDS1--Shovel the difficulties more thickly upon the hero.2--Get the hero almost buried in his troubles. (Figuratively, the villain has him prisoner and has him framed for a murder rap; the girl is presumably dead, everything is lost, and the DIFFERENT murder method is about to dispose of the suffering protagonist.)3--The hero extricates himself using HIS OWN SKILL, training or brawn.4--The mysteries remaining--one big one held over to this point will help grip interest--are cleared up in course of final conflict as hero takes the situation in hand.5--Final twist, a big surprise, (This can be the villain turning out to be the unexpected person, having the "Treasure" be a dud, etc.)6--The snapper, the punch line to end it.HAS: The SUSPENSE held out to the last line?The MENACE held out to the last?Everything been explained?It all happen logically?Is the Punch Line enough to leave the reader with that WARM FEELING?Did God kill the villain? Or the hero?
1. Ordinary World
2. Call To Adventure
3. Refusal of the Call
4. Meeting With The Mentor
5. Crossing The First Threshold
6. Tests, Allies, Enemies
7. Approach
8. Supreme Ordeal
9. Reward
10. The Road back
11. Resurrection
12. Return With Elixir
· THE ORDINARY WORLD
Most stories take the hero out of the ordinary, mundane world and into a Special World, new and alien. This is the familiar "fish out of water" idea which has spawned countless films and TV shows.
If you're going to show a fish out of his customary element, you first have to show him in that Ordinary World to create a vivid contrast with the strange new world he is about to enter.
Vocabulary – bordinary, mundane,special, alien,”fish out of water”,customary,vivid, contrast
· THE CALL TO ADVENTURE
The hero is presented with a problem, challenge, or adventure to undertake. Once presented with a Call to Adventure, she can no longer remain indefinitely in the comfort of the Ordinary World.
The Call to Adventure establishes the stakes of the game, and makes clear the hero's goal: to win the treasure or the lover, to get revenge or right a wrong, to achieve a dream, confront a challenge, or change a life.
Vocabulary – problem, challenge, adventure, undertake, presented, comfort, establish, stakes, goal.
· REFUSAL OF THE CALL
This one is about fear. Often at this point the hero balks at the threshold of adventure, Refusing the Call or expressing reluctance. After all, she is facing the greatest of all fears, terror of the unknown. The hero has not fully committed to the journey and may still be thinking of turning back. Some other influence---a change in circumstances, a further offense against the natural order of things, or the encouragement of a Mentor---is required to get her past this turning point of fear.
Vocabulary –threshold, balks, reluctance, terror, unknown, influence, circumstances
· MENTOR (THE WISE OLD MAN OR WOMAN)
By this time many stories will have introduced a Merlin-like character who is the hero's Mentor. The relationship between hero and Mentor is one of the most common themes in mythology, and one of the richest in its symbolic value. It stands for the bond between parent and child, teacher and student, doctor and patient, god and man.
The function of Mentors is to prepare the hero to face the unknown. They may give advice, guidance or magical equipment.
However the Mentor can only go so far with the hero. eventually the hero must face the unknown alone. Sometimes the Mentor is required to give the hero a swift kick in the pants to get the adventure going.
Vocabulary – Mentor, Bond, Guidamce, equipment, required, “swift kick in the pants”
· CROSSING THE FIRST THRESHOLD
Now the hero finally commits to the adventure and fully enters the Special World of the story for the first time by Crossing the First Threshold . He agrees to face the consequences of dealing with the problem or challenge posed in the Call to Adventure. This is the moment when the story takes off and the adventure really gets going. The balloon goes up, the ship sails, the romance begins, the plane or the spaceship soars off, the wagon train gets rolling.
Vocabulary – consequnce, commit
· TESTS, ALLIES AND ENEMIES
Once across the First Threshold, the hero naturally encounters new challenges and Tests, makes Allies and Enemies, and begins to learn the rules of the Special World.
Saloons and seedy bars seem to be good places for these transactions. Countless Westerns take the hero to a saloon where his manhood and determination are tested.
Scenes like these allow for character development as we watch the hero and his companions react under stress.
Of course not all tests, Alliances, and Enmities are confronted in bars. In many stories, these are simply encounters on the road.
Vocabulary – Tests , allies, enemies, alliances, encounter,
· APPROACH TO THE INMOST CAVE
The hero comes at last to the edge of a dangerous place, sometimes deep underground, where the object of the quest is hidden. Often it's the headquarters of the hero's greatest enemy, the most dangerous spot in the Special World, the Inmost Cave. When the hero enters that fearful place he will cross the second major threshold. Heroes often pause at the gate to prepare,plan, and outwit the villain's guards. This the phase of the Approach.
Approach covers all the preparations for entering the Inmost Cave and confronting death or supreme danger.
Vocabulary – approach, danger, outwit, prepare, plan
· THE SUPREME ORDEAL
Here the fortunes of the hero hit bottom in a direct confrontation with his greatest fear. he faces the possibility of death and is brought to the brink in a battle with a hostile force. The Supreme Ordeal is a "black moment" for the audience, as we are held in suspense and tension, not knowing if he will live or die.
This is a critical moment in any story, an Ordeal in which the hero must die or appear to die so that she can be born again. It's a major source of the magic of the heroic myth. The experience of the preceding stages have led us, the audience, to identify with the hero and her fate. What happens to the hero happens to us. We are encouraged to experience the brink-of-death moment with her. Our emotions are temporarily depressed so that they can be revived by the hero's return from death. The result of this revival is a feeling of elation and exhilaration.
Every story needs such life-or-death moment in which the hero or his goals are in moral jeopardy.
Vocabulary – supreme, ordeal, suspense, tension, preceding, depressed, elation, exhilaration, moral, jeopardy
· REWARD (SEIZING THE SWORD)
Having survived death, beaten the dragon, or slain the Minotaur, hero and audience have cause to celebrate. The hero now takes possession of the treasure she has come seeking, her Reward. It might be a special weapon like a magic sword, or a token like the =Grail or some elixir which can heal the wounded land.
Sometimes the "sword" is knowledge and experience that leads to greater understanding and a reconciliation with hostile forces.
Vocabulary – reward, celebrate, possession, seeking, token, elixier, reconciliation, hostile
· THE ROAD BACK
The hero's not out of the woods yet. We're crossing into Act Three now as the hero begins to deal with the consequences of confronting the dark forces of the Supreme Ordeal. If she has not yet managed to reconcile with the parent, the gods, or the hostile forces, they may come raging after her. Some of the best chase scenes spring up at this point, as the hero is pursued on The Road Back by the vengeful forces she has disturbed by Seizing the Sword, the elixir or the treasure.
This stage marks the decision to return to the Ordinary World. The hero realizes that the Special World must eventually be left behind, and there are still dangers, temptations, and tests ahead.
Vocabulary – realization, consequence, decision, disturb, temptations
· RESURRECTION
In ancient times, hunters and warriors had to be purified before they returned to their communities, because they had blood on their hands. The hero who has been to the realm of the dead must be reborn and cleansed in one last Ordeal of death and Resurrection before returning to the Ordinary World of the living.
This is often a second life-and-death moment, almost a replay of the death and rebirth of the Supreme Ordeal. Death and darkness get in one last, desperate shot before being finally defeated. It's a kind of final exam for the hero, who must be tested once more to see if he has really learned the lessons of the Supreme Ordeal.
The hero is transformed by these moments of death-and-rebirth, and is able to return to ordinary life reborn as a new being.
Vocabulary – purify, destiny, community, desperate, transform, ordinary
· RETURN WITH ELIXIR
The hero Returns to the Ordinary World, but the journey is meaningless unless she brings back some Elixir, treasure, or lesson from the Special World. The Elixir is a magic potion with the power to heal. It may be a great treasure like the Grail that magically heals the wounded land, or it simply might be knowledge or experience that could be useful; to the community someday.
Sometimes the elixir is treasure won on the quest, but it may be love, freedom, wisdom, or the knowledge that the Special World exists and can be survived.
The Hero's Journey is a skeletal framework that should be fleshed out with the details and surprises of the individual story. The structure should not call attention to itself, nor should it be followed too precisely. The order of the stages given here is only one of many possible variations. The stages can be deleted, added to, and drastically shuffled without losing any of their power.
The Hero's Journey is infinitely flexible, capable of endless variation without sacrificing any of its magic, and it will outlive us all.
Vocabulary – skeletal, framework, fleshed out, details, infinitely, flexible, sacrificing, variation
Notes on Writing Weird FictionBy H. P. Lovecraft
My reason for writing stories is to give myself the satisfaction of visualising more clearly and detailedly and stably the vague, elusive, fragmentary impressions of wonder, beauty, and adventurous expectancy which are conveyed to me by certain sights (scenic, architectural, atmospheric, etc.), ideas, occurrences, and images encountered in art and literature. I choose weird stories because they suit my inclination best—one of my strongest and most persistent wishes being to achieve, momentarily, the illusion of some strange suspension or violation of the galling limitations of time, space, and natural law which for ever imprison us and frustrate our curiosity about the infinite cosmic spaces beyond the radius of our sight and analysis. These stories frequently emphasise the element of horror because fear is our deepest and strongest emotion, and the one which best lends itself to the creation of nature-defying illusions. Horror and the unknown or the strange are always closely connected, so that it is hard to create a convincing picture of shattered natural law or cosmic alienage or “outsideness” without laying stress on the emotion of fear. The reason why time plays a great part in so many of my tales is that this element looms up in my mind as the most profoundly dramatic and grimly terrible thing in the universe. Conflict with time seems to me the most potent and fruitful theme in all human expression.Vocabulary – visualizing, detail, emphasize, scenic, architectural, atmosphere,alien, persistent, limitations, illusion, suspension, violation, curiosity, radius, potent, fruitful, expression While my chosen form of story-writing is obviously a special and perhaps a narrow one, it is none the less a persistent and permanent type of expression, as old as literature itself. There will always be a small percentage of persons who feel a burning curiosity about unknown outer space, and a burning desire to escape from the prison-house of the known and the real into those enchanted lands of incredible adventure and infinite possibilities which dreams open up to us, and which things like deep woods, fantastic urban towers, and flaming sunsets momentarily suggest. These persons include great authors as well as insignificant amateurs like myself—Dunsany, Poe, Arthur Machen, M. R. James, Algernon Blackwood, and Walter de la Mare being typical masters in this field. As to how I write a story—there is no one way. Each one of my tales has a different history. Once or twice I have literally written out a dream; but usually I start with a mood or idea or image which I wish to express, and revolve it in my mind until I can think of a good way of embodying it in some chain of dramatic occurrences capable of being recorded in concrete terms. I tend to run through a mental list of the basic conditions or situations best adapted to such a mood or idea or image, and then begin to speculate on logical and naturally motivated explanations of the given mood or idea or image in terms of the basic condition or situation chosen. The actual process of writing is of course as varied as the choice of theme and initial conception; but if the history of all my tales were analysed, it is just possible that the following set of rules might be deduced from the average procedure: (1) Prepare a synopsis or scenario of events in the order of their absolute occurrence —not the order of their narration. Describe with enough fulness to cover all vital points and motivate all incidents planned. Details, comments, and estimates of consequences are sometimes desirable in this temporary framework. (2) Prepare a second synopsis or scenario of events—this one in order of narration (not actual occurrence), with ample fulness and detail, and with notes as to changing perspective, stresses, and climax. Change the original synopsis to fit if such a change will increase the dramatic force or general effectiveness of the story. Interpolate or delete incidents at will—never being bound by the original conception even if the ultimate result be a tale wholly different from that first planned. Let additions and alterations be made whenever suggested by anything in the formulating process. (3) Write out the story—rapidly, fluently, and not too critically—following the second or narrative-order synopsis. Change incidents and plot whenever the developing process seems to suggest such change, never being bound by any previous design. If the development suddenly reveals new opportunities for dramatic effect or vivid storytelling, add whatever is thought advantageous—going back and reconciling the early parts to the new plan. Insert and delete whole sections if necessary or desirable, trying different beginnings and endings until the best arrangement is found. But be sure that all references throughout the story are thoroughly reconciled with the final design. Remove all possible superfluities—words, sentences, paragraphs, or whole episodes or elements—observing the usual precautions about the reconciling of all references. (4) Revise the entire text, paying attention to vocabulary, syntax, rhythm of prose, proportioning of parts, niceties of tone, grace and convincingness or transitions (scene to scene, slow and detailed action to rapid and sketchy time-covering action and vice versa. . . . etc., etc., etc.), effectiveness of beginning, ending, climaxes, etc., dramatic suspense and interest, plausibility and atmosphere, and various other elements. (5) Prepare a neatly typed copy—not hesitating to add final revisory touches where they seem in order. The first of these stages is often purely a mental one—a set of conditions and happenings being worked out in my head, and never set down until I am ready to prepare a detailed synopsis of events in order of narration. Then, too, I sometimes begin even the actual writing before I know how I shall develop the idea—this beginning forming a problem to be motivated and exploited.Vocabulary – occurrence, narration, possible, superfluous, reconcile, revose, proportion, plausibility, vice versa There are, I think, four distinct types of weird story; one expressing a mood or feeling, another expressing a pictorial conception, a third expressing a general situation, condition, legend, or intellectual conception, and a fourth explaining a definite tableau or specific dramatic situation or climax. In another way, weird tales may be grouped into two rough categories—those in which the marvel or horror concerns some condition or phenomenon, and those in which it concerns some action of persons in connexion with a bizarre condition or phenomenon. Each weird story—to speak more particularly of the horror type—seems to involve five definite elements: (a) some basic, underlying horror or abnormality—condition, entity, etc.—, (b) the general effects or bearings of the horror, (c) the mode of manifestation—object embodying the horror and phenomena observed—, (d) the types of fear-reaction pertaining to the horror, and (e) the specific effects of the horror in relation to the given set of conditions. In writing a weird story I always try very carefully to achieve the right mood and atmosphere, and place the emphasis where it belongs. One cannot, except in immature pulp charlatan–fiction, present an account of impossible, improbable, or inconceivable phenomena as a commonplace narrative of objective acts and conventional emotions. Inconceivable events and conditions have a special handicap to overcome, and this can be accomplished only through the maintenance of a careful realism in every phase of the story except that touching on the one given marvel. This marvel must be treated very impressively and deliberately—with a careful emotional “build-up”—else it will seem flat and unconvincing. Being the principal thing in the story, its mere existence should overshadow the characters and events. But the characters and events must be consistent and natural except where they touch the single marvel. In relation to the central wonder, the characters should shew the same overwhelming emotion which similar characters would shew toward such a wonder in real life. Never have a wonder taken for granted. Even when the characters are supposed to be accustomed to the wonder I try to weave an air of awe and impressiveness corresponding to what the reader should feel. A casual style ruins any serious fantasy. Atmosphere, not action, is the great desideratum of weird fiction. Indeed, all that a wonder story can ever be is a vivid picture of a certain type of human mood. The moment it tries to be anything else it becomes cheap, puerile, and unconvincing. Prime emphasis should be given to subtle suggestion—imperceptible hints and touches of selective associative detail which express shadings of moods and build up a vague illusion of the strange reality of the unreal. Avoid bald catalogues of incredible happenings which can have no substance or meaning apart from a sustaining cloud of colour and symbolism. These are the rules or standards which I have followed—consciously or unconsciously—ever since I first attempted the serious writing of fantasy. That my results are successful may well be disputed—but I feel at least sure that, had I ignored the considerations mentioned in the last few paragraphs, they would have been much worse than they are.Vocabulary - a mood or feeling, expressing , pictorial conception, situation, condition, legend, or intellectual conception, definite, tableau, specific, dramatic, situation, climax. Condition, phenomenon, elements, abnormality—condition, entity, manifestation, embody, phenomena, observed –reaction, pertaining
There are four lessons involved in the Lester Dent master pulp fiction plot, each is based on the 1500 word story blocks.
Lesson 1 – First 1500 words –
1. A DIFFERENT MURDER METHOD FOR VILLAIN TO USE
2. A DIFFERENT THING FOR VILLAIN TO BE SEEKING
3. A DIFFERENT LOCALE
4. A MENACE WHICH IS TO HANG LIKE A CLOUD OVER HERO
Lesson 2 – Second 1500 words
1--Shovel more grief onto the hero.
2--Hero, being heroic, struggles, and his struggles lead up to:
3--Another physical conflict.
4--A surprising plot twist to end the 1500 words.
Lesson 3- THIRD 1500 WORDS
1--Shovel the grief onto the hero.
2--Hero makes some headway, and corners the villain or somebody in:
3--A physical conflict.
4--A surprising plot twist, in which the hero preferably gets it in the neck bad, to end the 1500 words.
Lesson 4 - FOURTH 1500 WORDS
1--Shovel the difficulties more thickly upon the hero.
2--Get the hero almost buried in his troubles. (Figuratively, the villain has him prisoner and has him framed for a murder rap; the girl is presumably dead, everything is lost, and the DIFFERENT murder method is about to dispose of the suffering protagonist.)
3--The hero extricates himself using HIS OWN SKILL, training or brawn.
4--The mysteries remaining--one big one held over to this point will help grip interest--are cleared up in course of final conflict as hero takes
the situation in hand.
5--Final twist, a big surprise, (This can be the villain turning out to be the unexpected person, having the "Treasure" be a dud, etc.)
6--The snapper, the punch line to end it.
The Lester Dent Pulp Paper Master Fiction Plot
This is a formula, a master plot, for any 6000 word pulp story. It has worked on adventure, detective, western and war-air. It tells exactly where to put everything. It shows definitely just what must happen in each successive thousand words.No yarn of mine written to the formula has yet failed to sell.The business of building stories seems not much different from the business of building anything else.Here's how it starts:1. A DIFFERENT MURDER METHOD FOR VILLAIN TO USE2. A DIFFERENT THING FOR VILLAIN TO BE SEEKING3. A DIFFERENT LOCALE4. A MENACE WHICH IS TO HANG LIKE A CLOUD OVER HEROOne of these DIFFERENT things would be nice, two better, three swell. It may help if they are fully in mind before tackling the rest.A different murder method could be--different. Thinking of shooting, knifing, hydrocyanic, garroting, poison needles, scorpions, a few others, and writing them on paper gets them where they may suggest something. Scorpions and their poison bite? Maybe mosquitos or flies treated with deadly germs?If the victims are killed by ordinary methods, but found under strange and identical circumstances each time, it might serve, the reader of course not knowing until the end, that the method of murder is ordinary. Scribes who have their villain's victims found with butterflies, spiders or bats stamped on them could conceivably be flirting with this gag.Probably it won't do a lot of good to be too odd, fanciful or grotesque with murder methods.The different thing for the villain to be after might be something other than jewels, the stolen bank loot, the pearls, or some other old ones.Here, again one might get too bizarre.Unique locale? Easy. Selecting one that fits in with the murder method and the treasure--thing that villain wants--makes it simpler, and it's also nice to use a familiar one, a place where you've lived or worked. So many pulpateers don't. It sometimes saves embarrassment to know nearly as much about the locale as the editor, or enough to fool him.Here's a nifty much used in faking local color. For a story laid in Egypt, say, author finds a book titled "Conversational Egyptian Easily Learned," or something like that. He wants a character to ask in Egyptian, "What's the matter?" He looks in the book and finds, "El khabar, eyh?" To keep the reader from getting dizzy, it's perhaps wise to make it clear in some fashion, just what that means. Occasionally the text will tell this, or someone can repeat it in English. But it's a doubtful move to stop and tell the reader in so many words the English translation.The writer learns they have palm trees in Egypt. He looks in the book, finds the Egyptian for palm trees, and uses that. This kids editors and readers into thinking he knows something about Egypt.Here's the second installment of the master plot. Divide the 6000 word yarn into four 1500 word parts. In each 1500 word part, put the following:FIRST 1500 WORDS1--First line, or as near thereto as possible, introduce the hero and swat him with a fistful of trouble. Hint at a mystery, a menace or a problem to be solved--something the hero has to cope with.2--The hero pitches in to cope with his fistful of trouble. (He tries to fathom the mystery, defeat the menace, or solve the problem.)3--Introduce ALL the other characters as soon as possible. Bring them on in action.4--Hero's endevours land him in an actual physical conflict near the end of the first 1500 words.5--Near the end of first 1500 words, there is a complete surprise twist in the plot development.SO FAR: Does it have SUSPENSE? Is there a MENACE to the hero?Does everything happen logically?At this point, it might help to recall that action should do something besides advance the hero over the scenery. Suppose the hero has learned the dastards of villains have seized somebody named Eloise, who can explain the secret of what is behind all these sinister events. The hero corners villains, they fight, and villains get away. Not so hot.Hero should accomplish something with his tearing around, if only to rescue Eloise, and surprise! Eloise is a ring-tailed monkey. The hero counts the rings on Eloise's tail, if nothing better comes to mind.They're not real. The rings are painted there. Why?SECOND 1500 WORDS1--Shovel more grief onto the hero.2--Hero, being heroic, struggles, and his struggles lead up to:3--Another physical conflict.4--A surprising plot twist to end the 1500 words.NOW: Does second part have SUSPENSE?Does the MENACE grow like a black cloud?Is the hero getting it in the neck?Is the second part logical?DON'T TELL ABOUT IT***Show how the thing looked. This is one of the secrets of writing; never tell the reader--show him. (He trembles, roving eyes, slackened jaw, and such.) MAKE THE READER SEE HIM.When writing, it helps to get at least one minor surprise to the printed page. It is reasonable to to expect these minor surprises to sort of inveigle the reader into keeping on. They need not be such profound efforts. One method of accomplishing one now and then is to be gently misleading. Hero is examining the murder room. The door behind him begins slowly to open. He does not see it. He conducts his examination blissfully. Door eases open, wider and wider, until--surprise! The glass pane falls out of the big window across the room. It must have fallen slowly, and air blowing into the room caused the door to open. Then what the heck made the pane fall so slowly? More mystery.Characterizing a story actor consists of giving him some things which make him stick in the reader's mind. TAG HIM. BUILD YOUR PLOTS SO THAT ACTION CAN BE CONTINUOUS.THIRD 1500 WORDS1--Shovel the grief onto the hero.2--Hero makes some headway, and corners the villain or somebody in:3--A physical conflict.4--A surprising plot twist, in which the hero preferably gets it in the neck bad, to end the 1500 words.DOES: It still have SUSPENSE?The MENACE getting blacker?The hero finds himself in a hell of a fix?It all happens logically?These outlines or master formulas are only something to make you certain of inserting some physical conflict, and some genuine plot twists, with a little suspense and menace thrown in. Without them, there is no pulp story.These physical conflicts in each part might be DIFFERENT, too. If one fight is with fists, that can take care of the pugilism until next the next yarn. Same for poison gas and swords. There may, naturally, be exceptions. A hero with a peculiar punch, or a quick draw, might use it more than once.The idea is to avoid monotony.ACTION:Vivid, swift, no words wasted. Create suspense, make the reader see and feel the action.ATMOSPHERE:Hear, smell, see, feel and taste.DESCRIPTION:Trees, wind, scenery and water.THE SECRET OF ALL WRITING IS TO MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT.FOURTH 1500 WORDS1--Shovel the difficulties more thickly upon the hero.2--Get the hero almost buried in his troubles. (Figuratively, the villain has him prisoner and has him framed for a murder rap; the girl is presumably dead, everything is lost, and the DIFFERENT murder method is about to dispose of the suffering protagonist.)3--The hero extricates himself using HIS OWN SKILL, training or brawn.4--The mysteries remaining--one big one held over to this point will help grip interest--are cleared up in course of final conflict as hero takes the situation in hand.5--Final twist, a big surprise, (This can be the villain turning out to be the unexpected person, having the "Treasure" be a dud, etc.)6--The snapper, the punch line to end it.HAS: The SUSPENSE held out to the last line?The MENACE held out to the last?Everything been explained?It all happen logically?Is the Punch Line enough to leave the reader with that WARM FEELING?Did God kill the villain? Or the hero?
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